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1 July 2013 18:46
Salam alaykoum smiling smiley
I'm french and I need help about a cover letter in english (for integreate an European section in high school) . Can you help me please ? Thank's

Dear madam,
I am writing you this cover letter in order to demonstrate my movitation and my determination to join the European section of my high school next year.

I want to improve my capacities in English .
This section is a nice way to learn about the anglophone countries culture and history.

In my opinion speaking this language fluently is really important . It's a real advantage for my future career, travel and everyday life .

I know that this section would give me more work but I'm a serious and motivated student .

For me, it would be an honor to integrate this english section .

Hoping a positive response, thank you very much for your time and attention .
2 July 2013 08:56
Please smiling smiley just give me your opinion ...
K
2 July 2013 17:53
Good morning nounoursss,

You did good but just need a better style to shine a little bit. Your letter is more descriptive than expressive, so I am going to bring my modest contribution.

Here is a sample that you could redesign according to your situation and to your objectives.

Good luck !


< your name>
< your address >

July 2nd, 2013

< address of the School >

Dear Sir or Madam


As part of my professional project, which involves working in international business, it’s very important for me to perform a part of my studies in your school.
Indeed, In addition of having confirmed my taste in business, my working experiences have familiarized me with the English language.

Studying in XXXXXX would be a great opportunity to benefit from an international experience, to learn a new culture and to improve my English, in addition of that getting a Bachelor degree in XXXXXXX would allow me to get an internationally recognized diploma.

Your School has an excellent reputation both for the quality of its education and for the good studying conditions. Aside from having a practical education through job-ready courses, students are lucky to benefit from medium size classes and approachable teachers.
Besides, the (name of the school) is very well located, which allows to study in a very nice environment.

Thus, I am very keen to attend this course from September 2013, and I would be grateful if you could consider my application.
I look forward to hearing from you and I thank you for considering my application. Should you need further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Sincerely,
3 July 2013 22:50
Thank you very much for your help !
K
4 July 2013 16:43
You are most welcome.

Let us know how are things going on ...! thumbs up
4 July 2013 19:38
Hello smiling smiley

I have not changed the letter because I didn't have time...

But I had the answer and I'm accepted !!

Thank you very much for your help smiling smiley
K
4 July 2013 21:13
Congratulation !

We are all happy for you. Welcome
4 July 2013 22:40
Thank you !

And thank you for your time and effort ! thumbs up
R
13 July 2013 10:23
Glad to know about your acceptance for the desired internship. I too got enrolled for Mandarin as most of my business clients are Chinese people. The cv writing service cvpro helped me to compose a good cover letter to apply for the same.
 
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